Ok, so I got some more feedback. This time from an actual published author. The consensus is that I need to shorten the 'about me' section of the book. Done.
Now to finalize my plan for publishing. I need to get it onto Kindle and Kobo and CreateSpace. I have found an expert that I can call up via clarity.fm and I'm going to arrange to call him early next week to get some advice. The guy publishes several books a month on behalf of others.
I just want it to be out there and available for everyone to see. I'm really happy about how this project has turned out.